Tuesday, May 24, 2016

My 2 learning blog post

Happy poem
It’s better than popcorn ,
Better than a banana,
Staying up late getting up late


It’s better than playing on the playground ‘
Better than going away ,
Frightening my sister with a spider


It’s better than having friend over for the night ,
Better than ice cream and lollies to eat
It’s better than than racing the dog


It’s better than going to the park .
Better than The Simpsons, watching a show every day
Better than watching your t.v show all the time


I made new friends with people,  like my friends .

This is my Happy Poem. I am sharing it because I am proud of my work. I like the ideas that I thought of.

6 comments:

  1. THis is my peas of writing that I love and tank you to all you guise out there and
    I love it how you comments that you gave me

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    1. wow you really put a lot of work on this. Hope you get lots of comments on it. (cool)

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    2. wow you really put a lot of work on this. Hope you get lots of comments on it.:) :O :D

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